Ten Second Writing Tip – Hold That Murderous Thought, and Examine the Drapes

by Gayle Towell

drape

“Check this out,” you say, your voice urgent and excited. I look up, and you gesture at your new window treatment: paisley drapes—swirling designs in shades of green and pink, reminiscent of a spring morning, the fabric soft like the petals of a flower. Apparently.

But I was totally in the middle of stabbing my arch enemy with a screwdriver. He’s bleeding all over your floor and gurgling out his last breath. Seriously, what is wrong with you?

Don’t give setting in the middle of an action scene unless what you’re describing directly pertains to said action—like, if I want to use the drapes to wrap the body, and blood leaks through the fabric, darkening the paisley. Then maybe I care.

Advertisements

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s